Tuesday, November 10, 2015

HAPPY GUY FAWKES!!!

The story behind Guy Fawkes...

Along time ago, the parliament buildings were going to get blown up! The man was setting up a few bombs. Luckily, the guards saw him sneak around the back of the castle. Today we celebrate the day that the parliament buildings were saved. 

HAPPY GUY FAWKES!



PE Fun!

This term for PE, Rimu hub went through a rotation throughout the three skills. Running, jumping and throwing. I thought this was a great chance for me to train myself. Here is some explaining and personal voice through the rest of my post.....


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Thursday, October 29, 2015

Calendar Art


This year for calendar art we had options to pick from. There were a variety of stunning pieces of art. But this one caught my eye. The textured landscape. I liked this piece because it really caught my attention. Something that challenged me along the way was probably picking the right patterns. Something that I really thought was cool was the idea of the art. I am really happy that I picked this design because I am happy with the way it turned out. I hope you liked it.



Thursday, October 22, 2015

Character Description!

Mikaera My Cousin by Maia
WALT choose words that give the reader a vivid picture in their head
Purpose: To Entertain
Text Type: Character Description
My Writing Goal: Consistency with punctuation (editing skills).
Success Criteria:
Shows physical description
Shows character traits and actions
Organised into correct sentences and paragraphs 
Strong nouns, verbs and adjectives
Uses a good simile and can use other language features effectively
Has an entertaining anecdote (little story that happened) about the character

Mikaera

Mikeara can be a sporty sensation but he can also be a crazy clown. My cousin is the average kind. He will come and see you and give you a big hug even if you refuse. His personality can cheer you up when you are in a bad mood and he also tells you really bad jokes, but you still laugh at them anyway.

The first thing that you would probably see when you meet Mikaera are his twinkling, glinting eyes. He has a very gentle tan that shines in the light. He has chocolate hair swayed to the side, styled with gel. His ears are a curved oval with a squarer appearance. His nose is a slight tilt but I think it suits him. He has a full set of teeth that you can see twinkle from a mile away.

He is not the best at taking photos because his eyes are always squinched together. My cousin isn't from around here and he only comes to visit. He plays lots of sports and loves to mess around. So he is kind of a goofball. 

As you can probably visualise, my cousin has many different personalities. He is one of the best cousins you can have! But from my writing above, can you guess in the photo who I am talking about?
Leave in the comments who you think he is....


I liked this post because it was really fun and I loved to write it.
Something I learnt while writing was probably writing about someone else and describing their character. 

Friday, September 18, 2015

Guess What's Coming Up!



Last rugby World Cup, the All-Blacks came out with a win. Let's carry on with the trend aye! Here is some creative things I have made to represent the All-Blacks.......




On the 21st of September, I woke up at 4:00 (Yes, 4:00) just to watch the RWC!!!!
All Blacks vs Argentina

This match was probably one of the most challenging matches that the all blacks will play for their pool. It was a really close game as they were down in the first half. Luckily they made a come back in the second half. They came put with a win. 27/16 to the all blacks. 


Monday, September 07, 2015

Bright Feelings


Bright Feelings from Maia on Vimeo.

For literacy this week, I am studying Brooke Fraser who is a song artist. Here is a report about her.....

Report Success Criteria
Structured well (paragraphs and subheadings)
Vocabulary (best words and lots of topic words)
Sentences (variety of different sentence starters)
No personal pronouns
Detail (added in lots of true information)
Punctuation (helps the reader)

My Goal: To improve my punctuation. 

Brooke Fraser 

Introduction:
Brooke Fraser is a talented kiwi song/songwriter artist. She helps people, cares for people and has many different talents. With a star like this in our country, we are all proud to say that she is a true kiwi.


Who is it? Why are they famous?:
On her 27th birthday, Brooke Fraser raised over $54,000 for charities. Every cent she earned, she gave to charity. Also writing many amazing albums that have helped her career. She started off singing songs at her local folks house. She sung a lot of songs that she heard off the radio but then she began to write her own. This is when she started to make it one of her hobbies.

Early Life:
Fraser is the eldest of three children born to former All Black Bernie Fraser. Although she is a very talented song artist, she is also a musical sensation. Her musicality is also through the love of instruments. Brooke started playing piano as her first instrument at the age 7 all the way through to the age of 17. She also started writing songs at the age 12 and taught herself the acoustic guitar at 16.

Art Fame:
Her career started off at the age of 19 when people started hearing her songs out loud. Also it began coming along with her second hit single "Life Line" . This helped  her gain the advantage of touring Australia, Canada & USA in 2008. Also writing "What to do with Daylight" one of her hit albums that led her to the top. With greater Success, recording her more popular albums, "Albertine" and "Flags" has helped her to amazing fame.

Other Success And Awards:
She won the NZ Kiwi Artist award for her hit single "Something in the water". Also she is blowing New Zealand away with the effort of raising a lot of money for charity and giving every cent to them. Her new album, "Brutal Romantic" was recorded and produced with writer and song producer, David Kosten.

Conclusion: 
Brooke Fraser has stunned New Zealand with her amazing songs and hits. Her music is an amazing start to her career. 


Here Comes Something To Talk About.....

This week I have been sick and I feel real sorry for me. But.......

There is something that I know that is happening that I can just not wait for...... The Parkvale art gallery! I am so excited! I can't wait.

Moment in time
"What should I do for my art?" I said to myself. Then an idea comes to me. "I know, how about a pretty tree design. I mean, I love the outdoors and nature and also it will look pretty cool." I sit there scrolling down, beginning to doubt myself about the tree idea. But then, I see it......
"PERFECT!!!!!!"


(The piece of art I found online.....)


(My finishing product.....)

Friday, August 28, 2015

Facts About The Netball World Cup!



NZ Comes Out With A Win! (Match Against Aus Semis )

New Zealand fought a great battle against Australia but came out with the win. With a score of 52-47, only beating them by five. You can tell that it was a close game. The girls played exceptionally well and did us all proud. Well done to all of their hard work and effort. We can see the bright path where this is taking them.


Malia Paskea was a shooter for the silver ferns netball team.


I am proud of the silver ferns. Hope you enjoyed!

Tuesday, August 25, 2015

The Fun Run!

My heart pounds as I stance myself at the starting line. I stand, looking ahead ignoring the screaming and shouting coming from the crowd. I have the shivers and shakes all over. Then the I hear the words..... GO!!!!!!

My Fun Run Refection

In the fun run I competed in the year 6 girls competitive race.


I showed Parkvale Pride because when I was running I fell over, it hurt really bad but I got back up and kept on running.


Someone else I noticed in the fun run was Amy because she tried real well and did kea proud.


Monday, August 10, 2015

Bar Graphing

This is my Pic Collage explaining my bar graph and what we have been learning to do it. I hope you enjoy!


Jamie Curry

Success Criteria (based on Kidspeak progressions)
  • beginning, middle and end (structure)
  • topic words (vocabulary)
  • different sentence beginnings (sentence formation)
  • added detail to my ideas (content and ideas)
  • punctuation that helps the reader (punctuation)
  • my writing goal is to keep a variety of sentence starters and more specific language

Introduction
Jamie Curry is a talented comedic actress who at the age of nineteen, has already expressed her talent and made herself a star in New Zealand. Her teenage fame has lead her to the top. With a funny humor and a load of talent, she has been named the most famous teenager in New Zealand.

Who Is She?
When she attended Sacred Heart College, she was very liked and popular around the students. In her previous years, she lived in Taradale, Hawkes Bay. She is relatable to most teenagers which probably attracts more attention to her videos from that age group. Not afraid of what she looks like, she makes her videos with no make-up what so ever. A self-deprecating person like her does it for the fun and also for the laughs.

Early Life
In her spare time outside of her famous life, she takes part in some extracurricular activities. One of them is that she plays for her local soccer club, Marist. She is really competitive around these events. She said "If I make any savings from this, I will use it to decorate my room." Her computer skills aren't as good as she makes it look. She has her sister and friends to help her edit the videos.

YouTube Fame
Her Facebook page, Jamie's World, was created for her friends and her to post funny videos. They convinced her to do it at a soccer meeting, so she did it when she got home. She thought it would be good fun. Once she had posted a few videos, and as soon as she got one like, she got another and another and another. Her high school fame had surprised her. She arrived at school to see she had heaps of fans. After her page was created, she started to post some more videos. A week later, she had received more than 24,000 likes. She says, "It was luck that that was when the internet was watching." She has started up a YouTube and Twitter account. Every night in her spare time, she reads emails and messages from her fans. Still with more than 11,000 unread messages to reply to, she says "I feel like I need to give it back to them for watching my videos and for following me."

Other Successes
Her fame has lead her to other successes like being able to be filmed in a music video with kiwi song artist, Massad. Starring as the “girl next door” in the music video, The Girl Next Door. She also collaborates with Jamie McDell regularly. An even bigger achievement was getting the privilege to tour the UK with British Boy Band, M.A.D.

Conclusion
Jamie Curry is still making her humorous videos that entertain us all. Recently she has had more than 6.5 million likes on her Facebook page. She is an inspiration and a successful comedic actress.