Awesome Maia I like your writing it has lots of strong verbs I like how you put photo on Well done Keep up the good work
Good story Maia. You used good words and I loved the story. Well done.
I love how you have put your photo of you with your writing. Keep the excellent work up Maia!!!
That sounded so scary....well done you for keeping going..............Grandma
Well done Maia... Dad said he was very impressed with how well you did... Good for you xxx