Friday, April 24, 2015

Candy Fun Fair

Learning task: 
I turn around and in front of my eyes I see the most amazing scene. The Ferris wheel sparkles in the distance of the setting sun and the red sky's. Rows and rows of candy stands lined up to lead you around. Delicious candy floss stands right at view. With flags that blow in the subtle wind. Sploges of clouds across the fair. It is a very styled fair. The ferris wheel is tall, I stands right above me. Itmfeels like you're floating in a dream.

Full story 

I turn around and in front of my eyes I see the most amazing scene..... The CANDY FUN FAIR! It has a donut ferris wheel and lollipop trees and most of all, the snowman circus tent, where all of the acts perform with all of the gummy bear gymnast and the gingerbread jumpers and most of all, the big guy himself, Simon Van P. Snowman.

First of all, I want to go on the donut ferris wheel so I ask my mum.
"Mum, can we please go on the donut?"
"We can go on it soon, first we are going to go and get something to eat."
"Okay, but then can we go on it. Pleeeeeease!"
"Maybe, let's go and get some candy floss."

"Mum, mum, I want to have the blue and pink bag."
Okay, I will pay for that now."
So I am waiting in line just standing around listening to the sounds of screaming and squealing coming out of the joyful kids mouth. It sounds like you are in the room with a bunch of meowing cats that are being cashed by barking dogs. Finally, I got my blue, sticky, candy floss. It almost looked like a spiders web wound up on a stick. It was still yummy though.

"Can we go on the ferris wheels now?"
"After we go on the merry go round.
It looked like amazing fun. We were lucky because people just started arriving just after us. Once we stood up on the platform for our turn, there was a massive line going to about the other Sidon the fair. Some people even tried to push in line. When I sat down in my carriage with mum, I felt like I was sitting down on a cloud. And the bars the you hold on to during the ride were patterned into candy canes. And had lollipops sticking out the sides. This is going to be really fun. 

The ride was finished and I completely forgot about the Ferris wheel. So then mum asked me something,
"Do you want to go on the Ferris wheel?"
The moment she said that I was off in a flash. In the distance I also yelled,
It was so fun, we went as high as the sky! Good thing I didn't eat to much candy floss.
Unfortunately, I have to go home. I can't wait to come back next time.


  1. I enjoyed reading about your time at the Candy Fun Fair

  2. I love the scene at the start, Maia. It really puts a vivid picture in my mind. The way you started each sentence works a treat!

  3. Awesome story Maia! That makes me hungry just reading it! You did a really good job of describing that picture! Well Done!